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The Loving Steps by *TotemChakra:iconTotemChakra:



He took a step in, then I took a step back out
The wave of sins flooded the world, but what of me?
I said I shall fight until death, but he said no to that
We sought out for an escape, and we found it

I took a step in, then he took a step back out
The world cries with hearts of pain, but what of him?
He said he shall fight untill death, but I said no to that
We sought out for an escape, and we found it

Now, we are both cages of our own heart, our own hate
With the steps of love walking up that golden brick road
Echos could be heard across the fields of ages to paradise
I wish we had never taken those loving steps
©2008 *TotemChakra
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After a dream of mine, I wrote it down, but it kind of ended up more like a poem, or a weird bunch of words, instead of a brief telling of my dream. Hope you enjoy! I'm going to upload some pictures soon!

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~ProMenthefus:iconProMenthefus: May 2, 2008, 7:34:38 PM
Very cute i liked it :heart:

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When you hate the only person you hurt is yourself, because the people you hate dont know it and the others just dont care.
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*TotemChakra:iconTotemChakra: May 4, 2008, 5:47:37 PM
Really?! that's insane! : D

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I have given up on finding true love. My only point in life is to give love, not to gain it in anyway
~ProMenthefus:iconProMenthefus: May 4, 2008, 9:19:50 PM
lol i guess so... 8D

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When you hate the only person you hurt is yourself, because the people you hate dont know it and the others just dont care.